假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Animals are our friend.As students, what should we do to protect from animals?
Firstly, we mustn’t litter, that is the easiest way to helping protect the environment. Littering increase the damage to animals’ habitats. Secondly, persuading our parents not to buy jewelry made of ivory and clothing made of animals’ fur. That will also help protecting animals. Thirdly, it’s necessary to make more people realize importance of protecting animals. Lastly, be brave to stop those who harm animals.
I believe that if we all try their best, animals will be protected good.
