假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏宇符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏宇符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Good afternoon, fellow students! It's quite obvious what failure is part of our life. And no one can live their without suffer from failure, for which some people cry, some get drunk, and the others even become depressed for a long time.
But does remember that failure is the mother of success. So it is not wise to look on failure the end of the world. Disappointment, sadness and complaining are both useless. In my opinions, we should develop a positively attitude towards it and face it bravely. If we treated failure as an opportunity to learn, we can improve but get nearer to success day by day.
